SYNOPSIS
BY GUEST WRITER KACKIE L. SAUNDERS
Setting: Hill Valley, California; USA
The
scene opens on a cluttered house with lots and lots of clocks.
A TV is on, and the anchorwoman is talking about some missing
plutonium that appears to have been stolen. The houses
front door opens , and a young man with a skateboard walks in,
calling Doc? Hello, anybody home? He puts the skateboard
down and it rolls under a table and bumps into a crate that
says caution and a radiation symbol.
The young man plugs his electric guitar into a huge amplifier
and turns the amp up as loud as it will go. He touches the strings
of the guitar and theres a small explosion that knocks
him back into a shelf. Books and paint cans fall around him
as he slowly sits up. The phone rings and he stumbles through
the mess to answer it. Doc tells the young man, Marty McFly,
that he needs to meet with him in the mall parking lot at one
in the morning. Marty agrees. Doc asks what time it is, and
when Marty looks around at all the clocks and tells him that
its 8:00, Doc smugly says thats just what he wanted
to hear. All the clocks are 25 minutes slow. Marty realizes
this means hes late for school and hurriedly hangs up
and runs outside.
He rides his skateboard to school, listening to The Power
of Love on his headphones and waving at girls as he goes.
When he gets to school, a teenage girl runs out to him, warning
him to come around the back, because hes late to school
and she doesnt want him to get caught again. Even as they
come in the back way, though, a bald man stops them and gives
Marty his tardy slip. The man hears Marty mention to his girlfriend,
Jennifer, that he was late to work because of Docs clocks
being wrong. The bald man, Mr. Strickland, asks Marty if hes
still hanging out with Doc. Strickland quite obviously thinks
Doc is a maniac. Marty says he is and Strickland takes him by
the lapels of his jacket.
Youve got a real attitude, McFly. Youre a
slacker, the man says. He gets right into Martys
face as he says, Youre too much like your old man.
No McFly ever amounted to anything in the history of Hill Valley!
Marty coolly answers, Well, historys gonna change.
In the next scene, Marty and some of his friends are playing
rock music in front of some of their teachers for auditions.
One teacher with big glasses and slicked back hair (who is actually
Huey Lewis in a cameo role) stands and says theyre just
too darn loud. Marty is very upset, since they had barely gotten
started, and were already being disqualified.
He and Jennifer are walking home and Martys complaining
about what happened and saying maybe hes just not good
enough and should give up. He then says hes starting to
sound just like his father. Jennifer reminds him that hes
always quoting Doc, If you put your mind to it, you can
accomplish anything.
Marty and Jennifer sit down and are talking about their plans
to go to the lake together. Marty says his mother doesnt
know about it, and that she would freak out if she did find
out. She goes on about how she never did that kind of
stuff when she was my age. I swear the woman was born a nun.
Just as Martys about to kiss Jennifer, a lady shoves a
jar of change in their faces, shouting at them to save
the clock tower!
Marty gives her a quarter and tries to get her to go away. She
goes on about how that clock tower was struck by lightning thirty
years before, and gives Marty a flier about the save the
clock tower project. Jennifer writes her number on the
flier so Marty folds it up and keeps it, and then heads home.
When he gets home, he finds the family car being brought into
the driveway on a tow truck. The car is totaled. Marty comes
inside and hears an older guy named Biff complaining that when
the accident happened, he spilled beer on his shirt. Martys
dad , who owns the car, just says hes sorry. Biff helps
himself to a beer out of the McFlys refrigerator. I
have your car towed all the way here and all you got for me
is light beer?! Before Biff leaves, he tells Martys
dad, George, to say hello to Martys mom for him.
Marty looks at his dad in disgust. He totaled the car,
Dad! I needed that car! George says he knows, but Biff
is his boss.
At dinner that night, Marty, his older brother, his older sister,
his mom and his dad are talking about Martys Uncle Joey
who didnt make parole again. Martys sister changes
the subject by saying that Jennifer called for Marty while he
was outside moping about the car being wrecked.
Martys mother, Lorraine, acts horrified. I never
called boys! I never chased boys! she tells her kids.
She starts to tell her kids, again, how she met their father.
Thats so stupid! Grandpa hit him with the car!
Martys sister exclaims.
If that hadnt happened, none of you would have ever
been born! Lorraine says. She tells them that when George
got hit with the car, her father brought him inside and she
felt so sorry for him.
We know, we know, youve told us this story a hundred
time
he took you to the Fish Under the Sea Dance,
Martys sister interjects, rolling her eyes.
Enchantment Under the Sea Dance! Lorraine corrects
sternly. She then gets a faraway look in her eyes as she says
that was the first time he kissed her
and when she knew
she would spend the rest of her life with him. Just then, George
bursts out laughing, and everyone else at the table sighs.
In the next scene, Marty is asleep on top of his bed in a most
uncomfortable-looking position, with the lights on in his room.
The phone rings and he wakes up quickly and answers it. Its
Doc, asking him if he fell asleep.
No, no, of course not. Dont be silly, Marty
sleepily answers. He skateboards to the Twin Pines Mall, wearing
several layers of clothes and still looking a little cold, holding
a video camera. He sees Docs big van, and skateboards
to it. Docs dog, Einstein, is sitting by the van, so Marty
goes to him. He pats the dog. Wheres the Doc, Einie?
Just then, the back of the van opens and a DeLorean rolls down
from it, with a lot of smoke surrounding it. The left door swings
up and an older man with long, messy white hair steps out of
the car. Marty is staring openmouthed at it. Its
a DeLorean! he gasps. Doc has Marty turn his camera on,
straps his dog into the drivers side seat of the car,
and takes out a large handheld control. He backs the car up
with the control, and then has it drive right towards himself
and Marty. Marty tries to jump out of the way, but Doc reaches
out and pulls him back, making him keep the camera on the car.
When the car hits 88 miles an hour, the car disappears, leaving
fire trails. The license plate came off in the small explosion.
Marty tries to pick it up, his mouth hanging open. You
disintegrated Einstein! he tells Doc.
No I didnt! Doc promises, and starts trying
to explain to him that Einstein is the worlds first time
traveler. Just then, he hears a beeping noise and shoves Marty
out of the way. The car appears right where theyd been
standing a second before. Einstein gets out, unharmed.
Doc explains to Marty that Einstein just traveled one minute
into the future, and to the dog, it was instantaneous. Marty
cant help spluttering, Wait a minute
you built
a time machine out of a DeLorean?! Doc just replies that
he thought he ought to make his time machine with some style.
Doc then tells Marty to turn his camera on and start filming.
Doc shows him the inside of the car, where theres a lit-up
display panel of dates and times. He says that all you have
to do is punch a certain date in, get the car up to 88 miles
an hour, and then youll go to the date you set it at.
He then reminisces to Marty about the date of November 5, 1955,
after typing the date into the machine, when he was hanging
up a clock and slipped on his toilet seat and blacked out. When
he woke up, he had had a vision of the Flux Capacitor
what
makes time travel possible.
Doc throws his things into the car, telling Marty the car runs
on regular gas, but that the Flux Capacitor needs Plutonium.
He tells Marty hes going to the future, and promises to
look Marty up and see what hes up to, some time in the
future.
I almost forgot the Plutonium! Doc laughs, just
before he gets in the car to leave. He starts to go get the
Plutonium, when he sees a van approaching. Theyve
found me, he whispers. I dont know how, but
theyve found me. Run for it Marty!
Marty turns around and sees some Libyan men in a van, holding
all kinds of guns. Marty runs behind a car and Doc goes out
to meet the Libyans, pointing a tiny gun at them. As Marty watches,
the Libyans shoot Doc repeatedly, and he falls to the ground.
A very terrified but angry Marty runs into view, shouting at
them. The man with the machine gun points it at Marty, and Marty
closes his eyes
but the Libyans gun is jammed. Marty
takes his chance to run to the DeLorean and jump inside. He
throws the camera onto the seat next to him, and pulls the car
away as fast as he can.
The Libyans drive after him, chasing him around the parking
lot. Marty gets the car up to 88 miles an hour, and with a small
explosion, it disappears
and the Libyans are left behind.
Their van crashes into a shed and the screen goes black. It
comes up with Marty driving through a corn field, running into
a scarecrow that gets stuck on his windshield and finally crashing
into a barn.
A man, his wife, his son and daughter come out of their home
and run over to the barn. They peek inside, seeing the crashed
DeLorean. The boy holds up a comic book with a picture of a
alien spaceship and something standing beside it in a yellow
suit. Just then, Marty opens the door of the car and steps out
in a yellow radiation suit hed put on when Doc had been
handling the Plutonium.
The family starts freaking out, thinking hes an alien,
and run back into the house. Marty stumbles outside, saying,
Sorry about your barn. The man that owns the barn
comes back outside, but this time with a gun. He nearly shoots
Marty, who trips and falls back into the barn, then gets up
and gets back in the car. He drives out of the barn and away
from the house as fast as he can, running over a pine tree as
he goes and uprooting it.
As Marty drives, he keeps mumbling, This is just a dream.
A really intense
dream. He drives to where his home
should be, and instead sees a billboard saying the neighborhood
will soon be built. Since the car is having a starter problem
and dies, Marty takes off the radiation suit and pushes the
car behind a billboard. He gets out of the car, leaving his
camera and headphones behind, and starts walking along the road.
He sees a sign saying that town is two miles away, and sets
in for a pretty long walk.
When Marty finally comes into town, he stares around in utter
confusion. Hill Valley is clean and all of the girls are wearing
dresses, boys are carrying books for the girls, there are full-service
gas stations with guys in nice uniforms, new record albums are
being advertised, and the movie on the marquee stars Ronald
Reagan. Marty slowly walks across the street to a trash can
where a man has just thrown his newspaper away. Marty picks
up the newspaper and looks at the date
November 5, 1955.
He throws the newspaper down, muttering to himself that it cant
be true.
He decides to call Doc, if he even can, and finds a small diner.
The owner of the diner laughs when he sees Martys red
vest. You jump ship, kid? Marty gives him a confused
look and asks where the phone is. The man points him in the
right direction, and Marty hurries off to make his phone call.
He takes out a phone book and searches for Docs name.
He finds it, and tries calling him, but gets no answer. The
owner of the diner walks by Marty just as Martys 1985
wrist watch starts chirping. He quickly hides his wrist behind
his back and smiles at the man. The diner owner walks away finally,
and Marty rips the page with Docs number out of the phone
book.
He carries it to the front of the diner, asking if the owner
knows where Docs street is. You gonna buy something,
kid? the man interrupts.
Can I have a Pepsi Free? Marty asks.
You want a Pepsi, youre gonna have to pay for it!
Well, can I have a Tab then? Marty asks next, still
confused and not sure what to say in this strange place.
You gotta order something to have a tab!
Okay, just give me something without any sugar,
Marty says finally, and sits down next to a teen boy.
The door to the diner opens, and a small group of teen boys
swagger in. Hey McFly! I thought I told you never to come
in here! the leader exclaims. Marty turns around, recognizing
the voice. The boy next to him also turns around, and the group
of punks walk straight to him. One of them sees Martys
vest and says, Look at this. The dork thinks hes
gonna drown. Even the boy next to Marty laughs at that.
Then, he turns his attention back to the leader of the punks,
who wants to know if this kid, George, has his homework done
for him yet. Marty has a scary realization; the kid sitting
next to him is his dad, just younger, and the leader of the
punks is Biff!
Biff and his gang leave, and Marty stares at his future father
until George gets upset and asks him why hes staring.
Youre George McFly! Marty whispers in amazement.
Just then a young black man who works at the diner walks up
to George and tells him to stand tall, and stop taking abuse
from Biff.
But hes bigger then me, George replies.
Have some respect for yourself! Why if I could--
Youre gonna be mayor! Marty realizes.
Mayor! the black man says, perking up.
A colored mayor. Thatll be the day, someone
comments.
You wait and see
I will be mayor. And when I am,
Im gonna clean up this town! the future mayor promises
earnestly.
Good. You can start by sweeping the floor, the owner
of the diner says, handing him a broom.
Mayor Goldie Wilson. I like the sound of that! the
someday mayor says to himself, walking away. Marty turns his
attention back to where George was sitting, but finds him gone.
He looks outside and sees George riding away on a bicycle. He
runs outside and shouts, Dad!
George!
Hey,
you with the bike!
The next scene shows George on a tree limb, holding binoculars
and looking into a girls bedroom. Marty has just caught
up to him and sees what hes doing. Hes displeased
to see that his father is a peeping tom, but before he can do
anything, George slips and falls out of the tree, landing in
the road. A car is approaching, and Marty shoves George out
of the street, and gets hit by the car. Marty is thrown back
onto the pavement, hitting his head and blacking out.
A middle-aged man gets out and sees him lying there. Stella!
he shouts. Another damn kid ran in front of my car. Get
out here and help me bring him inside. The scene swirls
slowly out and blackens.
The next thing you hear is Martys mothers voice.
Marty hears his mother, and doesnt open his eyes. Hes
in a dark room, in bed, with the covers pulled up. He tells
his mom he had a nightmare about going back in time.
Well, youre awake now. Back in good old 1955,
his mother replies.
1955?! Marty demands, opening his eyes and sitting
up as a lamp is turned on. He sees his mother all right, but
shes much younger. Youre my mo--youre
my mo--my mo--
My names Lorraine, she tells him, Lorraine
Baines.. He starts to get up buts realizes his jeans are
missing.
Where are my pants? he demands. She points and says
theyre on her hope chest. She calls him Calvin, and he
asks why she called him that. She says it must be his name;
its written all over his underwear... Calvin Klein.
She asks if people call him Cal. He says that people actually
call him Marty. She moves closer to him, and he is becoming
uncomfortable as she looks at him. She tries to touch the bruise
on his face, and he tries to avoid her hand. He falls off the
bed in the process, and Lorraines mother calls for her.
Lorraine jumps up and throws Marty his pants, and then runs
downstairs.
Marty comes downstairs, too, to find the man who hit him with
the car is working on a TV, several kids are sitting at the
dinner table, his pregnant future grandmother is sitting down
to eat, and his jailbird Uncle Joey is a baby, in his crib.
He cries whenever we take him out, so we just leave him
in there all the time, Martys grandmother tells
him about Joey. Marty quietly says to the baby, Better
get used to these bars, kid.
He sits down with the family, who is very excited to have a
TV on while theyre eating dinner. One of the kids says
that its their first TV, and Marty says his family has
two. The boys face lights up and he says to Marty, Wow,
you must be rich! Martys grandmother scolds her
son. Hes teasing you, dear. No one has two television
sets. As Marty watches the TV, he recognizes the episode
of the show thats on, and says that hes seen it
before. How could you have seen it? one of the kids
asks. Its brand new.
Marty says he saw it on a rerun, and they all stare at him blankly,
asking what a rerun is. Martys grandmother looks at him.
You look so familiar, Marty. Do I know your mother?
she asks. He looks at Lorraine.
You know, I think maybe you do.
Well, maybe I should give her a call
You cant, Marty says quickly. Lorraine suggests
that Marty stays for the night, since he did get hit by her
fathers car. She reaches under the table and squeezes
his knee and Marty jumps up. He says he has to leave, and gets
out of the house as soon as he possibly can. Lorraines
mother comments on what a strange young man he was.
Hes an idiot; comes from upbringing. His parents
were probably idiots, too. Lorraine, if you ever have a kid
like that, Ill disown you, Lorraines father
said. Lorraine is staring at the door that Marty just left out
of, looking dreamy-eyed.
Marty finds Docs house, and its getting dark outside.
He runs to the door and knocks, impatiently waiting. The door
opens, and a much-younger Doc is standing there, wearing some
huge humming thing on his head, and he has a bruise. He grabs
Martys arm and yanks him into the house. He says hes
going to try to read Martys mind about what hes
there for. He keeps guessing wrong, so Marty finally pulls the
thing off of his forehead and says that he had come from the
future in a time machine that Doc would invent.
Do you have any idea what this means? Doc whispers.
It means this damn thing doesnt work at all!
he shouts, paying attention to his mind-reading thing and not
Marty. Marty keeps trying to convince Doc that hes telling
the truth. He even shows Doc his drivers license and a
picture of his brother and sister and him. His sister has a
shirt with the year she graduated printed on the front. Doc
still doesnt believe him. So whos the President
in 1985?
Ronald Reagan.
Ronald Reagan? The actor? Doc starts laughing and
asks if Jerry Lewis is the Vice President. Doc laughs as he
runs over to the building next to his home with all of his gadgets
and gizmos in a box. Marty chases after him and gets the door
slammed in his face.
I know how you got that bruise on your head. You were
standing on your toilet seat, straightening a clock and you
fell off and hit your head. When you woke up, you got the idea
for the flux capacitor
which is what makes time travel
possible. The door opens and Doc stares at him wide-eyed.
Marty takes Doc to the DeLorean, and shows him the Flux Capacitor.
Doc holds up a drawing of it that hed just made. It
works! Doc shouts, and Marty mutters something about you
bet your ass it works.
In the next scene, Doc and Marty are back at Docs house,
and Marty is hooking his video camera up to Docs TV. He
plays the tape hed made with the 1985 Doc explaining time
travel and how its possible. 1955 Doc hears the words
5.21 Gigowatts and panics.
5.21 Gigowatts?! he shouts, pulling on his hair.
5.21 Gigowatts! Doc runs from the room, and Marty
follows him, asking what is a Gigowatt?!
Doc tells Marty that theres no way for them to get Plutonium,
and that he cant think of any other way to harness enough
energy
except maybe a bolt of lightning. Marty thinks
of Jennifer and how much hed miss her if he was stuck
in the past. He takes out the love note shed written him
on the paper from the clock-tower lady, and gives it to Doc.
Im so sorry, Marty, Doc says, but theres
never anyway to know when lightning would strike. As Marty thinks
about that paper Jennifer had scribbled the note on, though,
he gets an idea.
Yes we do, he tells Doc, turning the paper over
and showing the printed side talking about the clock tower and
when it had been struck by lightning. Doc grins, saying that
it just might work. The important thing, though, is to get prepared
for it quickly. Marty thinks its a great idea, and besides,
he adds, itll give him a chance to get to look around
a little. Doc takes him by the shoulders, and tells him he absolutely
cant interact with the people there, since he could be
in danger of causing a paradox. Doc asks him if hes bumped
into anyone yet.
Well
I sorta bumped into my parents, Marty
says, shrugging. He says that he got hit with the car that his
dad was supposed to get hit with. Doc tells him he could mess
up his parents meeting, and cause a huge paradox.
Doc takes Marty to the high school. Marty is impressed with
how nice and clean it looks. They look around for his dad, and
while they look for him, they hear a big commotion. George is
walking towards them with a kick me sign on his
back, and a bunch of bullies kicking him. He drops his books
as a younger Mr. Strickland walks up and the bullies hurry away.
Mr. Strickland shouts at George that hes a slacker, as
Doc and Marty watch. Maybe you were adopted, Doc
finally suggests. Marty knows thats not true, though,
so he runs after George.
Remember me? The guy who saved your life the other day,
Marty tells him. Marty then says he has someone he wants George
to meet. Marty brings him to where a cluster of girls are standing
by the lockers--Lorraine with them. She sees Marty.
Calvin! she exclaims. She tries to touch his face,
and she asks him how it feels. He tells her it feels better,
and tries to get her attention on George, but Lorraine cant
tear her eyes from Marty. The bell rings and all of the girls
run off together. Isnt he a dreamboat? Lorraine
sighs to her friends as they leave. By then, George has left
too, and Doc catches up with Marty. He starts trying to explain
to Marty in a very complicated way that his mother is now enamored
with him.
Wait, wait, Doc
are you saying that my mom
has got the hots for me? Marty asks him, trying to cut
through all the big words. Docs pretty sure they mean
the same thing. This is heavy.
Theres that word again! Heavy! Why are
things so heavy in the future? Is there a problem with the Earths
gravitational pull? Doc demands. Marty just stares at
him blankly and they let it drop.
Doc tells Marty they need to get his parents together to do
something. He asks what they like to do together.
Nothing, Marty answers after thinking about it.
Doc leans on a wall that has a poster on it, saying that they
need to think of some kind of social function that they could
set his parents up at. Of course! The Enchantment Under
the Sea Dance!
This is where they kiss! Marty exclaims, pointing at the
poster on the wall. They both know they have to convince George
to ask Lorraine to the dance.
Marty finds George in the lunchroom, scribbling in a little
notebook instead of eating. Marty sits down across from him.
Remember that girl I introduced you to? Lorraine? She
told me to tell you that she really wants you to ask her to
the Enchantment Under the Sea Dance, Marty tells him.
He asks what George is writing.
Science fiction stories
about aliens coming down
from other planets.
Get out of town
I didnt know you did anything
creative, Marty says, grinning. Here, let me read
some of it. As he reaches for the notebook though, George
pulls it away.
Oh, no, I couldnt let anyone read it. They might
not like it and tell me Im no good. I just dont
think I could take that kind of rejection. But, you wouldnt
probably understand that, would you?
Marty sighs. Yeah. Yeah I would, he admits. Anyway
about Lorraine.
George says he doesnt think Lorraine wants to go with
him; she wants to go with someone else. Marty asks who, and
George points over his shoulder. Biff.
Marty turns around to see Biff holding onto his moms arm.
She slaps him, and tells him to let go of her. He just squeezes
harder, and Marty jumps up. He takes a handful of Biffs
collar and pulls him away from Lorraine. She said get
your meat hooks off-- Marty starts to say, but Biff stands
all the way up, (and seems to tower over Marty), and takes Martys
collar in his own huge hand. It looks like theres going
to be a fight, but Mr. Strickland walks up to them, and Biff
lets go of Marty.
Since youre new, Im gonna cut you a break,
Biff says, straightening Martys shirt. So make like
a tree
and get out of here. When Marty gets away
from Biff, he looks around for George, but hes gone.
Marty finds George on his way home, and tells him that Lorraine
really wants to go to the dance with him, he just needs to get
up the courage to ask her. George tells him he cant go
to the dance anyway, because he doesnt want to miss his
favorite show, Science Fiction Theater. George runs
inside his house and Marty stands on the driveway, thinking.
In the next scene, Marty is standing in Georges bedroom,
wearing his yellow radiation suit, holding his Walkman. He puts
the headphones on Georges head and pushes Play.
Loud rock music blasts from the headphones, and George wakes
up and nearly panics when he sees Marty.
Who--who are you? he gasps.
My name is Darth Vader [insert heavy breathing] Im
from the Planet Vulcan, Marty announces, holding his hand
up in a Vulcan salute.
In the next scene, its the afternoon and Martys
standing by a diner and gas station. George sees him, and runs.
Georges clothes and hair are disheveled, and hes
gasping. Marty asks him where he was. You werent
at school today.
Last night, Darth Vader from the planet Vulcan came down
and said hed melt my brains if I didnt ask Lorraine
to the dance, George tells him, taking the whole thing
very seriously.
Okay, but lets keep all of this brain-melting stuff
to ourselves, okay? Marty asks, trying to straighten Georges
clothes a little. He says that Lorraine is in the diner, and
George asks what he should say. Marty starts giving him some
suggestions, and George takes out his notepad so he can write
the stuff down. Its a wonder I was ever born,
Marty mutters.
What?
Nothing, nothing, Marty says, and pushes George
inside. George walks slowly to Lorraine, whos sitting
with a few of her friends. She sees him and asks if she knows
him from somewhere.
Im George
George McFly, and Im your density
I mean
your destiny, George tells her. Lorraine
smiles--but then Biff comes in with his gang, shouting at George
that he told him never to come in there. Marty waits until Biff
is about to pass by him, and then sticks his foot out and trips
the bully. Biff lands on the ground, and then angrily stands
up to tower of Marty again.
Whats that? Marty asks, pointing over Biffs
shoulder. Biff turns and Marty punches him, then runs outside.
When he sees Biff and his gang following him, Marty stops a
couple of kids and takes one of their old-fashioned scooters
from them. He hurries away on it, while Biff and his gang jump
into a car. They try chasing him down, but Martys good
on the skateboard. He gets out onto the street, holding onto
the back of a car, when Biff nearly runs him over with their
car. Marty jumps off of the skateboard, walks up and over Biffs
car, and jumps off the back onto his waiting skateboard. A distracted
Biff then crashes into a truck of manure.
Lorraine has seen all of this, and is even more convinced that
Marty is her dream come true. She follows him back to Docs
house.
Doc has set up a model Hill Valley to demonstrate to Marty how
the lightning will hit the car and how Marty will be sent forward
in time. Doc puts a model car on the model street and has Marty
wind it up and let it go. When the fake lightning hits it, theres
a small explosion and the car flies off the table, on fire.
It hits a pile of rags and starts it on fire. Doc gasps and
grabs a fire extinguisher. Youre instilling a lot
of confidence in me, Doc, Marty jokes, looking at the
smoking car. Theres a knock at the door; its Lorraine.
Doc moves aside and lets Marty try to convince Lorraine to go
to the dance with George.
Oh, hes cute and all, she says. But
I think a man should be strong. Stand up for the woman he loves.
Dont you?
Marty agrees yes, and Lorraine asks him to take her to the dance.
Well, Marty goes to Georges house and starts coming up
with a plan. Marty will drive Lorraine there, George will waltz
up and find them struggling in the car, punch Marty, and look
like a hero. Hell then victoriously take Lorraine inside
the school to dance. Marty mentions that Lorraine will be very
mad at him.
Why will she be mad at you? George asks, knowing
how much Lorraine likes Marty. Marty says because nice girls
dont like it when guys take advantage of them. He then
tries to make George stop thinking about that and concentrate
on the rest of the plan. So, Ill walk up to the
car
do you think I should swear? Marty says yes.
So youll punch me. Im down for the count,
Marty adds. It sounds like a perfect plan thatll work
great. Martys got a lot on his mind, though, because he
not only has to get his parents back together, but he also has
to get back to his own time.
The night of the dance, Doc has the time machine covered by
a huge tarp, and is setting up wires and cables to catch the
power from the lightning. A policeman comes along and asks him
if he has a permit. Doc says that he does, and reaches into
his pocket. Instead of getting a permit, though, he takes money
out and gives it to the man, who takes it and leaves them alone.
Marty is about to pick Lorraine up for the dance, but before
he goes, he sits down to write Doc a letter. He doesnt
know how else to tell his friend that in 1985, he will be shot
and killed by terrorists. He asks Doc to take whatever precautions
are necessary to keep it from happening. He signs the letter
and slips it into Docs coat pocket.
Marty drives Lorraine up to the school, and asks nervously if
she minds if they park. She grins and says, Im seventeen
years old. Its not like Ive never parked before.
Marty gasps, remembering how she always acted like such a saint.
She shocks him even more by taking out a small bottle.
You drink? Marty asks. She says she stole it from
her mom. Marty tells her that she may regret drinking so much,
later in life. She lights a cigarette next. You smoke
too?!
Don't be such a square, Lorraine tells him. You
sound just like my mother. Martys eyes get big when
she says that. She tells him he seems nervous, and asks him
whats wrong. He asks her if there was ever something that
she had to do, that she didnt want to do. She says yes.
You know what I do? she whispers. I dont
think about it. She leans over and kisses him, making
Martys eyes get even bigger. He tries to move away from
her and ends up leaned completely against his door, looking
thoroughly terrified and freaked out. Lorraine pulls away from
him, a strange look on her face. She says she knows its
strange, but, when I kiss you
its like
Im kissing my brother. She wrinkles her nose up
at the thought. A very relieved and slightly shaky Marty sits
up and says thats not weird at all. They hear someone
coming.
Instead of it being George, though, its Biff. He yanks
Marty out of the car then pushes Marty to his bullies, who hold
him while Biff gets into the car with Lorraine. Lorraine tries
to get away from him, but cant. One of Biffs gang
members punches Marty in the stomach, and they carry him off.
They throw him into the trunk of a car, and close the trunk.
There are people in the car, though--the band thats performing
at the dance. They all get out of the car and the bullies run
off.
Marty calls for someone to get him out of the trunk. Where
are the keys? one of the men asks, searching his pockets.
In here!
What was that?
I said, the keys are in here! Marty says.
Just then, George walks up to the car that Lorraine and Biff
are in, thinking that Marty is with Lorraine. He opens the door
and tells Biff to get his hands off of Lorraine. As he realizes
who he just said it to, though, he gets scared.
You got the wrong car. Get out of here, Biff says.
Lorraine begs George to help her.
No Biff, you leave her alone, George insists. Biff
climbs out of the car, towering over George and glaring at him.
He takes Georges arm and twists it behind his back.
Stop it Biff, youll break his arm! Lorraine
says, trying to stop Biff from hurting George. Biff turns and
pushes her so hard that it knocks her down, laughing as he does
it. George sees this, balls his hand into a fist, and punches
Biff so hard that it knocks him out. Biff falls to the ground,
and George looks down at Lorraine.
Are you okay? he asks, offering his hand to her.
Lorraine looks into his eyes as she takes his hand and allows
him to pull her to her feet. Just then, the band has gotten
Marty out of the trunk, but the lead guitarist/singer cut his
hand badly, while doing it. Marty runs up the car, where people
are now gathered around, and sees George and Lorraine happily
walking away together, arm-in-arm.
Marty goes back to the band members and tells them theyd
better get inside and start playing some music. The lead guitarist/singer
shakes his head and says that he cut his hand too badly, and
that they cant perform anymore unless Marty knows someone
who can play guitar. Marty, of course, can.
So in the next scene, Martys up on the stage, strumming
a guitar, with his eyes glued on his dancing future parents.
As George and Lorraine are dancing, though, some dorky guy comes
up to them, pushes George away from Lorraine, and starts dancing
with her. Marty gasps, suddenly not able to play. He slides
down to the ground, staring at his hand as it starts disappearing.
The picture he has of himself, his brother and sister shows
his siblings gone, and hes disappearing, too.
Martys about to completely be erased from existence, when
George pushes the dorky guy thats dancing with Lorraine,
and kisses her. Marty sits up, stands up, and watches as his
parents kiss, and then stare into each others eyes as
they dance.
When the songs over, a fully recovered Marty is about
to leave the stage, when the singer, Marvin Berry, says, Lets
do another one
something that really cooks.
Marty considers this. Something that really cooks,
he says to himself. He steps up the microphone and tells the
audience that hes going to play an oldie. The people seem
a little disappointed. Well, its an oldie where
I come from, he explains. He tells the other band members
what to do, and then tells them to try to keep up with him.
Marty does some very excellent guitar playing and singing for
the song Johnny B. Goode, and gets everyone in the
audience feverishly dancing. Of course, theyve never heard
anything like it before, so at first theyre not even sure
exactly how to dance to it.
Marvin is very excited about this song, so he runs to a phone
to call his cousin, Chuck. Chuck, you know that new sound
youre looking for? Well, listen to this! Marvin
shouts, and then holds the phone up so Chuck can hear. Marty,
meanwhile, starts getting a little crazy; he wants to look like
all of his favorite rock stars by kicking things off stage and
doing all kinds of weird antics on stage. The audience has pretty
much stopped dancing, and everyones staring at Marty.
He stops finally, and tells everyone he guesses they werent
ready for it yet. But your kids are gonna love it,
he says.
Marty tries to leave, but he runs into George and Lorraine.
That was very interesting music, Lorraine says.
She tells Marty George is going to take her home.
Great! I had a feeling about you two! Marty exclaims.
Hes about to leave, but comes back to his future parents.
He tells them that if they ever have kids, and one of them accidentally
starts the living room carpet on fire, to go easy on him. George
and Lorraine smile to themselves, and as Marty walks away, Lorraine
says, Marty. What a nice name.
Marty finds Doc, and as the storm overhead starts, they prepare
for Marty to take his trip into the future. At the last minute,
Doc discovers Martys letter in his jacket pocket and asks
what it is.
Youll find out in thirty years, Marty answers,
and Doc rips the letter up, saying that he already knows too
much about his future anyway. Doc discovers that a cable has
slipped loose from the clock on the clock tower, and hurries
up to fix it. Once hes up there, Marty knows its
about time to get in the car to go the future, so he tries to
shout to Doc what will happen to him in 1985 with the terrorists,
but the clock starts chiming, and Martys voice is drowned
out.
Marty gets in the car, and drives it to the place Doc had told
him to, waiting for the little alarm clock Doc put in the car
to go off. He sets the time machines date and time so
that hell go back to the future a few minutes before he
left. His plan is to warn the 1985 Doc of whats going
to happen to him, since the 1955 Doc wont listen. Just
as the clock goes off, the cars engine dies. Marty struggles
with the car, trying to get it to start again. Finally he smashes
his face into the steering wheel in frustration, and the car
starts.
Docs having his own troubles, getting the cables all connected.
Every time he gets one connected, another one seems to come
apart somewhere down the line. It finally all comes together
as the DeLorean hits 88 miles an hour, and Marty squeezes his
eyes shut, not sure whats going to happen. The lightning
strikes, the energy going down through the cable and into the
car. With a small explosion, Marty disappears. 1955 Doc looks
around in amazement at the fire trails that are all thats
left of Marty and the DeLorean. Doc starts cheering, glad that
the whole thing actually worked.
The scene switches to Marty appearing in 1985, waking up a drunk
homeless guy in the process. Marty gets out of the car, and
tells the drunk that its great to see him again. Everything
looks great, he exclaims. He notices a clock, though,
and remembers he has to get to Doc to stop him from being shot
by the terrorists. Marty jumps back into the car, only to find
it wont start again.
The Libyans drive by Marty, on their way to the mall, so he
decides to just leave the DeLorean. He runs as fast as he can
to the Lone Pine Mall, but still arrives too late. He watches
himself drive off in the DeLorean and disappear.
He watches the Libyan van crash, and everything becomes quiet.
Marty walks down to where Doc is lying on the ground, appearing
to be dead. Marty sits next to him, crying because he didnt
make it in time.
Doc sits up, though. Marty jumps when he sees Doc moving. Doc
opens his radiation suit to reveal a bulletproof vest.
A bulletproof vest. How did you know? Marty asks.
Doc takes out Martys letter, which is very old and yellowed,
and taped together.
Doc drives Marty home, and says hes going to the future.
When you get there, look me up, Marty requests.
Its the middle of the night, so after Doc leaves, Marty
climbs through his bedroom window and goes right to sleep.
In the morning, Marty walks out of his room yawning. He nearly
passes out when he sees the kitchen and dining room, though.
The kitchen looks beautiful, and his siblings are sitting at
the dining room table, wearing expensive clothes. His brothers
reading a newspaper.
What are you wearing? Marty asks, looking at his
brothers suit.
I always wear a suit to the office. His brother
says, laughing. Just then, Martys parents come inside.
They both look much younger then they had at the beginning of
the movie, and seem much more in love with each other. Marty
falls off the of barstool hes sitting on when he sees
them.
Marty, are you okay? his mother worriedly asks.
Marty says hes fine, but continues to stare in happy bewilderment
at his new home
his new family!
Oh, Jennifer Parker called, his sister says. Lorraine
smiles.
I really like that girl, Marty, she tells him with
a smile. She says she thinks Martys going to have a great
time going to the lake with Jennifer.
Mom, I cant go the lake. The cars totaled,
Marty reminds his mom. His whole family seems shocked, demanding
what he means.
What? Why am I always the last one to know about these
things? Dave asks.
Calm down, Im sure the cars fine, George
tells everyone. Marty follows his dad to the door, and looks
out to see Biff putting wax on a very nice, new car. See,
the cars fine. Now, Biff, I said two coats of wax!
Im just putting the second one on, Biff promises.
George smiles and walks away, but Marty stays in the doorway,
staring at Biff.
In a few minutes, Biff carries in a box. I think its
your new book! Biff says. George opens the box and pulls
out of a copy of a thick book he wrote. The picture on the front
shows a man and woman facing each other with a person in a yellow
radiation suit between them.
Biff tells Marty that his truck is all washed and waxed, ready
for tonight. Marty takes the keys from Biff, perplexed. He walks
to the garage to find the black truck hed wanted, waiting
for him.
Hey, how about a ride, Mister? Jennifer calls, walking
up to him. Marty takes her by the shoulders.
Are you a sight for sore eyes.
Marty, you act like you havent seen me in a week!
I havent.
Is everything okay, Marty? Jennifer asks worriedly,
touching his face. Marty looks back at his house, and sees his
parents in the doorway, smiling and hugging.
Everythings great, he says. He kisses Jennifer,
but their kiss is interrupted by the DeLorean appearing in the
driveway. Doc jumps out , wearing weird clothes, and tells Marty
he has to come with him immediately.
Where?
To the future! Doc shouts. He says that Marty and
Jennifer turn out all right, but their kids have some kind of
problem.
Marty and Jennifer get in the DeLorean with Doc. Jennifer is
sitting on Martys lap, very confused about whats
going on.
You need to back up, Doc. You dont have enough road
to make it 88 miles an hour, Marty says.
Roads
where were going, we dont need
roads,
Doc answers with a smile.
The car rises from the ground, the tires folding flat. The car
goes forward, banks to the left, turns around and takes off
for
the future!
The End
--Kackie
L. Saunders
8/19/04
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